| 2974.1 | Assessment | |
| Research Question (Clear, unambiguous) | "Does childhood obesity result in increased likelihood of type II diabetes?" A straightforward research question, although a bit lacking in the social aspects we would expect. | |
| Relevant Literature | Simply listing URLs is inappropriate. The two articles in question are relevant, but they do not define what the literature review should cover. | |
| Causal Interpretations (clear, all parts defined, mechanisms, controls, plausible) | The causal alternatives are straightforward and reasonable. That they neglect any mention of social factors is odd. Childhood obesity (and adult obesity) is neither random nor a simple reflection of genetic predisposition. | |
| Data (variables, sample, comparison) | The Add Health data seem appropriate. | |
| Research Value | Showing the significance of childhood obesity will not be possible without examining the various conditions that could cause spurious findings or suppress recognition of significant ones. | |
| Overall | This is a sensible initial project outline that we would expect to be expanded to include social conditions if it were to be pursued. | |