2432.1	Assessment
Research Question (Clear, unambiguous)	It is difficult to discern the research question.  The problem area seems to be sources of violent behavior.
Relevant Literature	The Raine book is a contentious popular account, and as such not the best linchpin for a literature review.
Causal Interpretations (clear, all parts defined, mechanisms, controls, plausible)	The causal suggestions are not well stated (e.g., reconsider the phrase "individuals who are predisposed to having parents who suffer from").  Simply put, they seem to suggest that genetic predisposition, family environment, and class origins could all influence the likelihood of violent behavior.  Okay.  Don't you think there is quite a bit of research on these possibilities?
Data (variables, sample, comparison)	The Uniform Crime Reports seem irrelevant.  The National Victimization Surveys are studies of victims, not those who commit violence.  It is difficult to see where you could go with this data.
Research Value	The reasons offered make little sense.  The goal is to indicate why your research will offer findings that have value beyond what is already known.
Overall	This starts with an interesting topic, but seems to go nowhere.