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Assessment |
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Research Question
(Clear, unambiguous) |
"Has there been a steady decline in
admissions to humanities programs across the United States? What factors
might explain this decline, should it exist?" While the area of interest is clear, the
problem statement is clumsy.
Presumably the intent is to ask if the proportion of college graduates
with a major in humanity disciplines has declined significantly over the past
several decades. It is not about
admissions and it must be size rather than the steadiness of a decline that
is the key question. |
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Relevant
Literature |
The three cited articles
seem marginally relevant, but no pointers toward a literature review appear. |
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Causal Interpretations
(clear, all parts defined, mechanisms, controls, plausible) |
The causal discussion is also awkward, but
seems to posit that increased tuition or rising employment in science and
technology might be causes of declining humanities enrollments. What is meant by either increased tuition
(relative to what?) or rising employment in science (again, relative to what)
is unclear. We may infer the intent is
to suggest that students might choose humanities less if their parents pay
more for their education, although why we would expect this is unclear. Similarly, the aim of the second suggestion
seems to be that students' major decisions respond to the labor market, and
that rising employment in scientific or technological fields implies an
apparent decline in jobs available with humanities degrees, and thus
disciplinary shifts. How one would
show these were causes compared to alternative possibilities is neglected. |
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Data
(variables, sample, comparison) |
As described, the data
seem poorly chosen to pursue the research question. |
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Research Value |
There is a considerable literature on students'
academic choices. How this might
contribute to that literature is unclear. |
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Overall |
The project starts with
a potentially interesting if vague question about historical change, then
falters about transforming it into a research project. |
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